I didn’t so much walk through the door as fall on my face in a puddle of my own blood. Not my best entrance ever, but then again, not my worst.
I burst through the front door, Bone Talisman at my heels, and hollered,”Alvin!…
Hmm. Good advice! Now I’m torn. But it still leads into the scene, and I’m still working on it b/c the oaxing is giving me trouble. So I will continue to play around with it. Thanks!
Whoops that’s supposed to say ‘pacing.’